Post by wicketstorm on Dec 30, 2008 16:48:49 GMT -5
{ok i wanted to see what you guys thought of my story so far.}
Prolouge:
A silver tabby arose as her fur glistened in the moonlight.”We can’t stop it”! She said. “theres no way we can stop the truth from opening up”! She said pitifully. Now a ginger tom stood. “They will find out either way”. He agreed. “What will we do if the truth leaks out”? Asked a golden she-cat. “We will just have to see what happens”. Said the tom. “By letting a fight rupture in the forest”! Argued the the golden she-cat her fur prickling.”We can’t stop the truth now goldenflower”. Replyed the tom. His deap voice calming yet strong. “Im sorry but what happens”. He let his voice go to a whisper. “Happens”. He let his gaze settle on goldenflower. “We can’t let our clanmates die because of our faults”. Goldenflower hissed. “Theres nothing more we can do”.Said the silver tabby. “Fine then”. Said goldenflower. “I will help them myself”. She spat at them. Goldenflower heavily padded out of the clearing and out of site. “Great now she is letting the whole of starclan in her paws”. The ginger tom said bitterly. “Who cares about that right now, The forest is in grave danger”!She said worridly. “Well like you said we have no control over it. He hissed. “I know l;ionclaw”!She through back at him. By the flick of her tail she ended the meeting and quickly made her way out of the moonlight filtered clearing. Questions romed through the toms head but all he could mutter out was “Amen” Then with nothing left to say he followed her remaining shadow out of the clearing and through the cave entrence, leaving the clearing empty.
Prolouge:
A silver tabby arose as her fur glistened in the moonlight.”We can’t stop it”! She said. “theres no way we can stop the truth from opening up”! She said pitifully. Now a ginger tom stood. “They will find out either way”. He agreed. “What will we do if the truth leaks out”? Asked a golden she-cat. “We will just have to see what happens”. Said the tom. “By letting a fight rupture in the forest”! Argued the the golden she-cat her fur prickling.”We can’t stop the truth now goldenflower”. Replyed the tom. His deap voice calming yet strong. “Im sorry but what happens”. He let his voice go to a whisper. “Happens”. He let his gaze settle on goldenflower. “We can’t let our clanmates die because of our faults”. Goldenflower hissed. “Theres nothing more we can do”.Said the silver tabby. “Fine then”. Said goldenflower. “I will help them myself”. She spat at them. Goldenflower heavily padded out of the clearing and out of site. “Great now she is letting the whole of starclan in her paws”. The ginger tom said bitterly. “Who cares about that right now, The forest is in grave danger”!She said worridly. “Well like you said we have no control over it. He hissed. “I know l;ionclaw”!She through back at him. By the flick of her tail she ended the meeting and quickly made her way out of the moonlight filtered clearing. Questions romed through the toms head but all he could mutter out was “Amen” Then with nothing left to say he followed her remaining shadow out of the clearing and through the cave entrence, leaving the clearing empty.